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wizards
Jul 26 2007, 11:54 AM EDT | Post edited: Jul 26 2007, 11:54 AM EDT
I thought we convinced you to avoid the wizard story, and rewrite it into some thing more legendary. the rest of your world looks so good. but this part just seems clunky and unpolished.

--TBM2
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